[Mpi3-tools] Final draft of MPIR Document

[Martin Schulz]

Hi Marc-Andre,

Thanks for the comments - all fixed and in SVN, except for the
comment in the picture, which I will leave to John.

Martin


On Sep 1, 2010, at 2:02 AM, Marc-André Hermanns wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> apologies for my late comments.
>
> I refer to the SVN version on Monday morning.
>
> p.1, l.33:
> wasnt -> wasn't
>
> p.1, l.44:
> current state state -> current state
>
> p.2, l.22:
> the tool read symbol … and trace ... -> the tool reads symbol … and  
> traces
> or
> the tools read symbol … and trace
>
> p.2, l.43:
> attaches to MPI processes -> attaches to the MPI processes
>
> p.8, l.30:
> attach Colorgreenmode -> attach mode
>
> p.12, l.23
> (sorry that I obviously missed this in previous drafts)
> In the figure 8.1 directly with the first step, shouldn't the arrow  
> be pointing into the other direction?
> I would read the figure (as it is right now) as "The tools starts  
> mpiexec".
> whereas the text reads "The tools is started on the mpiexec  
> executable".
> Could someone help to clarify this?
>
> p.18, l.41:
> be reported it to -> be reported to
>
> p.21, l.1:
> the tool need only release -> the tool needs only to release
>
> Cheers,
> Marc-Andre
>
> On 28.08.2010, at 01:02, Martin Schulz wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Attached is the final version of the MPIR document, as we are  
>> planning to present it to
>> the MPI forum. Please speak up if you have any final comments or  
>> concerns. Otherwise,
>> we are planning to submit this version on Monday to the forum for  
>> review for the
>> September meeting.
>>
>> Martin
>>
>> <mpi-report.pdf>
>>
>>
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