[Mpi3-rma] MPI RMA revisions from public comment

[William Gropp]

I have read through Jeremiah Willcock's careful reading of the RMA chapter and applied many of his fixes.  I've attached a version of the chapter with changes in red (including ALL changes, not just the public comment changes).  Deletions are not marked.  I'll send a reply to Willcock to the comments list, but I wanted to get this out for checking now.  Most of the non-trivial notes I've left for MPI-next.

Bill
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William Gropp
Director, Parallel Computing Institute
Deputy Director for Research
Institute for Advanced Computing Applications and Technologies
Paul and Cynthia Saylor Professor of Computer Science
University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign