[Mpi3-rma] Updated Proposal 1 posted

[William Gropp]

I've posted an update to proposal 1, with thanks to Rajeev for his  
careful reading.  These are mostly fixes for typos, but there were  
also some oversights that I've addressed.

Bill

William Gropp
Deputy Director for Research
Institute for Advanced Computing Applications and Technologies
Paul and Cynthia Saylor Professor of Computer Science
University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign