[mpi3-coll] New nonblocking collective intro text

[Torsten Hoefler]

On Sat, Jan 31, 2009 at 11:37:19AM -0800, Bronis R. de Supinski wrote:
> 
> Torsten:
> 
> Re:
> > collective operations on overlapping communicators that would lead to
> > "that" -> "which"
> 
> Huh? The rev3 PDF still has that. I don't have a strong
> opinion over whether the clause is required but I think
> you are right that it is not. So, you should change it
> to ", which" (make sure you include the comma).
uh, it came back with the new intro -> fixed 

> Related to this, currently on p49, lines 45-47, you have:
> 
> > The start call initiates the operation which indicates that
> > the system may start to copy data out of the send buffer and
> > into the receive buffer.
> 
> A comma is needed before the "which":
> 
>  The start call initiates the operation, which indicates that
>  the system may start to copy data out of the send buffer and
>  into the receive buffer.
this was also introduced with the new intro -> fixed

> Otherwise, the current version looks good to me.
thanks!

I updated
http://www.unixer.de/sec/nbc-proposal-rev-3.pdf and
http://www.unixer.de/sec/nbc-proposal-rev-3.diff

Best,
  Torsten

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