[Mpi-22] Ticket #77 review

[Rolf Rabenseifner]

Bill,

I'm not sure, whether you get the email automatically through ticket 
77
because you are not on the CC list.
Therefore here the same text as in the ticket:

Because final MPI-2.2 meeting is approaching soon, I checked also
this ticket.
Here some details. All page:linenumbers are based on review-pdf from
svn revision 384.
  
   - svn384_xxii:22  - "Jeffrey M." instead of "Jeff"
   - svn384_xxii:22  - add "; MPI-2.1 Secretary"
   - svn384_xxiii:3  - "The HDF Group" instead of "HDF Group"
   - svn384_xxiii:25 - "SUN Microsystems, Inc.", i.e., with "s Inc."
   - svn384_xxiv:2   - There was a comment, to make plural
                       ("Communications"), but the chapter title is 
singular.
   - svn384_xxiv:7   - ", Info-Object", i.e., with comma after "Träff"
   - svn384_xxiv:16  - add "; MPI-2.2 Secretary"
   - svn384_xxiv:19  - "Bindings" instead of "bindings"
   - svn384_xxiv:23  - remove "This list needs to be checked ..."
   - svn384_xxiv:40  - "Jeffrey M." instead of "Jeff"
   - svn384_xxv:10   - remove line with "HLRS" (it is already there on 
xxv:36)
   - svn384_xxv:14   - please check, for full name of "Inst. Adv. Sci. 
& Eng.
   - svn384_xxiii:38-40 and svn384_xxv:41-43 - should you write the 
two
     sentences in both locations in the same sequence? When I 
understood
     correctly, then NSF has funded more than HDF.
  
   - MPI-2.1_4:19, you added new text. One list item is "Any extension 
must
     have significant benefit for users". The period at the end of the
     sentence is missing.

Best regards
Rolf

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