[Mpi-21] AUTHORS+REVIEWERS - reminder - Draft Apr. 12, 2008

Adam Moody moody20 at [hidden]
Thu Apr 17 20:01:18 CDT 2008



Hi Rolf,
I'll need Friday the 18th to incorporate Torsten's comments into the 
Collectives chapter.  I missed them when he first sent them.
-Adam

Rolf Rabenseifner wrote:

>All authors (except Rich [pt2pt and datatypes]),
>
>- The authors get back the write-token until Thursday, Apr. 17.
>  (If you need also Friday Apr. 18, then please inform me!!)
>- All stuff that is not done until that point, will be defered to MPI-2.2!
>
>This is the last reminder and chance for latest updates **today**.
>
>(Details on the WORKPLAN, see mail below)
>
>Best regards
>Rolf
>
>
>On Sun, 13 Apr 2008 00:05:37 +0200
> "Rolf Rabenseifner" <rabenseifner_at_[hidden]> wrote:
>  
>
>>Dear chapter author, dear reviewer,
>>
>>This e-mail is the first preparation of the official reading.
>>Please read carefully.
>>
>>Again,we have a stable and consistent draft.
>>It is SVN revision 108 and pdf and ps are on
>>    http://www.hlrs.de/mpi/mpi21/doc/ 
>>(username and password are mpi21)
>>
>>Nearly all chapters have received an update by the chapters' authors.
>>Not finished is - as far as I can see
>> - Point-to-point (may-be without MPI-1/2 problems] (Rich Graham)
>> - Datatypes [it was split from Point-to-point]     (Rich Graham)
>>and full MPI-2 based chapters (maybe without need for updates)
>> - Terms (Tony Skjellum)
>> - External Interfaces (Bronis de Supinski)
>> - Profiling (Bronis de Supinski)
>>Therefore, review can start in all chapters, except the datatype chapter.
>>
>>IMPORTANT for authors:
>>If you make further modifications, please be sure that you use
>>the macros and that your modification (or at least an delete-anchor) 
>>is printed **red**. (Details on using the macros, see below.)
>>Please check red color in the resulting mpi-report.pdf before you 
>>svn commit your changes.
>>As far as I can see, all changes up to now may have no problem 
>>for acceptance by the Forum.
>>At this late stage, I would recommend to do only changes that do 
>>not need intensive debates at the Forum meeting. Such things 
>>would be MPI-2.2 modifications.
>>
>>IMPORTANT for reviewers:
>>- Please check very carefully all red or magenta changes.
>>  Modifications are done by  the chapter's author (red) or 
>>  by me (magenta).
>>  You may be the first reviewer who read and check this text.
>>- Please check carefully the cyan text.
>>  Those modifications are proposed by a reviewer and have been
>>  implemented by my
>>  You may be the second reviewer for those modifications.
>>- All green stuff should be fine, because it is based on
>>  Forum's decisions (Ballot 1-4).
>>- Original text is black (MPI-1.3) or blue (MPI-2.0).
>>- Please make all comments in the format
>>
>>----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>1234567890123456789012345678901234567890123456789012345678901234567890123456789012
>>          All references are based on MPI-2.1 Draft Apr. 12, 2008
>>ww.a  __  pnnn.ll text   (with nnn=page number and ll=line number
>>          text continued
>>          ...
>>ww.b  __  pnnn.ll text ... and so on (total line length <= 82 characters.)
>>----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>- Please send only review items that are in the category
>>   -- ERROR, must be fixed.
>>- If you want to send an item in the categories
>>   -- Nice to have,
>>   -- Editorial proposal (like move xxx to yyy),
>>   -- Clarification which needs Forum decisions,
>>   -- ...
>>  then please substitute the __ by 22, because then it should be
>>  handled in MPI-2.2. 
>>
>>This format is used in 
>>http://www.hlrs.de/mpi/mpi21/doc/MPI-2.1draft-2008-02-23-review.txt
>>where all reviews are filed in.
>>(I'll substitute your xx by the next number. If you have more than
>>26 items, then please continue with xx.a -- xx.z, yy.a - ...)
>>
>>Please use this format. I'll have only a few minutes between two flights
>>to put all reviews together. 
>> 
>>WORKPLAN:
>>- The authors get back the write-token until Thursday, Apr. 17.
>>  (If you need also Friday Apr. 18, then please inform me!!)
>>- All stuff that is not done until that point, will be defered to MPI-2.2!
>>- I'm on travel and may not be able to respond on e-mails this week.
>>- On Friday, Apr. 18 (or Saturday, Apr. 19), I will make the
>>  final version for all final reviews and for the official reading.
>>- Version Apr. 17 together with all your review mails will be the
>>  basis for the official reading. 
>>- Reviews until Friday, Apr. 25. according the format above.
>>- Saturday, Apr. 26:
>>  I will put all reviews together to have unique numbers.
>>   
>>Best regards
>>Rolf
>> 
>>
>>Annex: The rules for authors:
>>
>>The goals of your work as chapter author:
>>-----------------------------------------
>>
>>- Remove references to MPI-1 and MPI-2.
>>- Substitute by MPI.
>>- Necessary modifications to achieve this goal.
>>
>>With this, we should have a single MPI-2.1 standard that does 
>>not "know" the MPI-1 or MPI-2 history of individual functions.
>>
>>** This should be mainly a task in the area of chapter-introductions.
>>** Please, never change the wording of function definitions.
>>
>>Exceptions: 
>>- There are routines that are deprecated and that are
>>  already referenced in a consistent way.
>>  My recommendation:
>>   Current wording: 
>>     There are *new* function, and existing are now deprecated.
>>   Proposal: 
>>     There are functions, and there exist also deprecated functions 
>>     with (nearly) same functionality but deprecated due to some lack
>>     in the bindings (or functionality)
>>- There is history information in the frontmatter.
>>- there is a change-log annex with limited memory (only previous version)
>>
>>Technical editing rule:
>>-----------------------
>>
>>You must identify all of your changes:
>>
>>a) new/modified wording - you are highlighting your new/modified wording with:
>>
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEbegin% MPI-2.1 round-two - begin of modification
>>.... your modified / new wording ....
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEendI% MPI-2.1 round-two - end of modification
>>
>>b) Moved paragraphs, sentences, ... - you are highlighting the first word
>>   of the moved text with:
>>    
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEbegin% MPI-2.1 round-two - begin of text-move
>>First-word
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEendI%  MPI-2.1 round-two - ongoing text-move
>>... rest of the moved text....
>>% MPI-2.1 round-two - end of text-move
>>
>>c) If you want to delete text (i.e. not only a move to another location),
>>   the please us
>>
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEbegin% MPI-2.1 round-two - deleted-text-anchor
>>Last word of the previous text
>>\mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEendI%  MPI-2.1 round-two - end of anchor
>>
>>% MPI-2.1 round-two - begin of deteted text - Draft Apr.1, 2008 page/line-page/line
>>% the text you delete must be preceded with "% "
>>% deprecated text
>>% ...
>>% deprecated text
>>% MPI-2.1 round-two - end of deteted text
>>
>>   Additionally, you must add this outcommented text to the end of
>>   removed_source.tex 
>>
>>Caution: These macros work only in black parts of the text.
>>
>>In blue parts you must substitute 
>>  \mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEendI%
>>by
>>  \mpiiidotiMergeNEWforSINGLEendII%
>>
>>
>>The highlighting is done with red color.
>>(There are only a few other sentences from me magenta.
>> Therefore red should be the best to highlight the round-two modifications.)
>>
>>-----------------------------------------------------
>>Using svn:
>>Before you start to make changes:
>> 
>>  cd ....your_directory..../trunk/MPI-2.1/
>>  svn update
>>
>>to get the newest sources.
>>
>>After you made changes, please call make and check mpi-report.pdf
>>to guarantee that all your changes are really highlighted with *red* color.
>>
>>When you make the first svn commit after you received a new username with
>>write-permission, you must use the aditional option
>>
>>  --username your_new_user_name
>>
>>Please commit with 
>>
>>svn commit chap-xxxx/xxxx.tex -m 'MPI-2.1 - your name - what you have done'
>>
>>Please commit as soon as you finished the changes and after you have
>>checked the red color.
>>
>>--------------------------------------------------
>>
>>Dr. Rolf Rabenseifner . . . . . . . . . .. email rabenseifner_at_[hidden]
>>High Performance Computing Center (HLRS) . phone ++49(0)711/685-65530
>>University of Stuttgart . . . . . . . . .. fax ++49(0)711 / 685-65832
>>Head of Dpmt Parallel Computing . . . www.hlrs.de/people/rabenseifner
>>Nobelstr. 19, D-70550 Stuttgart, Germany . (Office: Allmandring 30)
>>    
>>
>
>
>
>Dr. Rolf Rabenseifner . . . . . . . . . .. email rabenseifner_at_[hidden]
>High Performance Computing Center (HLRS) . phone ++49(0)711/685-65530
>University of Stuttgart . . . . . . . . .. fax ++49(0)711 / 685-65832
>Head of Dpmt Parallel Computing . . . www.hlrs.de/people/rabenseifner
>Nobelstr. 19, D-70550 Stuttgart, Germany . (Office: Allmandring 30)
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