<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Hi Mohamad,<div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>One small comment about the change to lines 38-43 on p484: this sentence: "All processes, belonging to the group of the communicator that was used to open the file, must call collective I/O operations (blocking and nonblocking) in the same order." doesn't need any commas. Also, I would probably add the same advise to users for MPI_FILE_IWRITE_ORDERED as you added for MPI_FILE_IREAD_ORDERED.</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>Otherwise, looks good to me, :-)</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>Quincey<br><div><br><div><div>On Feb 15, 2012, at 2:37 PM, Mohamad Chaarawi wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite">
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Hi All,<br>
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I attached to the ticket
(<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://svn.mpi-forum.org/trac/mpi-forum-web/ticket/273">https://svn.mpi-forum.org/trac/mpi-forum-web/ticket/273</a>) the
updated draft with the suggested ticket 0 changes from the reading
at the last meeting.<br>
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For your convenience, here are the changes made to the text
including the page number:<br>
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<pre wrap="">p:444 We should make table 13.1 have three rows: blocking, nonblocking & split collective, along with marking the split collectives as deprecated in the table (if possible). (ticket 0)
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<pre wrap="">p:451 (line 21), 456 (line 40), 463 (line 21) We need to change the 'void *' buffer parameters for the "write" routines to be 'const void *'.</pre>
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<pre wrap="">p: 484 (line 46) "Quality" should be "High Quality".</pre>
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<pre wrap="">p: 484 (line 38-43) The sentence ending with "in between" needs editing to indicate what the collective operations are "between".
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<li>I rephrased this sentence a little and added a reference to
the collective semantics.<br>
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<pre wrap="">p: 484 (line 36) "belonging to the communicator" should be "belonging to the group of the communicator".</pre>
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<pre wrap="">p: 484 (line 48) "All calls" should be changed to "All nonblocking collective I/O calls".</pre>
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<pre wrap="">p: 445 (line 25) The sentence "In a nonblocking or split collective operation, the pointer is updated by the call that initiates the I/O, possibly before the access completes." should have a note about the split collectives being deprecated.</pre>
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<pre>p"462 (line 28) Add advice to users to indicate the result of intermixing nonblocking collective and independent shared file pointer operations is undefined</pre>
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Please let me know if you have any comments about the changes.<br>
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Thanks,<br>
Mohamad<br>
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