General: count arguments (integer) -> count arguments (nonnegative integer) - See Rolf's list Sec., section XXX -> Section XXX p.32, line 40 darry -> darray p.41, line 35 "many (most?) users expect" -> "users may expect" p.45, line 2 "or in" -> "or on" p.45, line 25, line 41 remove white space after ( p.55, line 22-24 is this true? p.75, line 15 enhanced -> extended p.76, line 43 "is is" -> "is" p.81, line 25-26 lots of LaTeX generated white space. Remove if possible p.85, line 47 Add forward reference to I/O chapter p.86, line 11 $i$ -> \mpiarg{i} p.87, line 30 Add forward reference to I/O Chapter/Section p.88, line 48 Add forward reference to topology chapter p.94 MPI_UB, MPI_LB are deprecated, and these sections should probably be written differently. Consider p.96, line 19 "new function" -> "function" (delete "new") p.98, line 1 and line 18 same is said twice, remove either sentence p.125, line 12 "but for MPI-2" -> "but currently"